The problem of young people which was affected by the city development? IELTS Writing P2

As major cities around the world are growing fast, many problems occur. 

What are the problems caused by the continued growth that young people living in cities are facing? 

What solutions do you suggest?

At present, because of the sharp development of the city, increasingly stronger competition generate in society, especially for the youth, rapid developing of society brings more and more living pressure to them. Such as employment problems and health issues.

In my view, the problem of unemployment is a most serious factor that causes more and more young people to shoulder the living pressure. Since they need the stable income to keep living, even get married. But it is true that a host of urban young people living with a low living standard.

Besides, caused by increasing the environment pollution and living pressure, a host of youth suffered from varying degrees of chronic or even mental illness. In other words, they are the victims which are generated by the development of modern society.

How to improve this situation? I deem it is one of the most effective approaches that our government should be taking more responsibilities for this. For unemployment, Government should play an important role in this problem, for instance, Government could give more financial aid to help those small companies, which would accelerate their company developing and generate much more position. Moreover, speaking of the health issue of young, I suggest that government should offer appropriate free-medical to those young people.

Totally, development of the economy is a significant task for every country, but we could not ignore the health and development of young since they are the future and hope of the country.