The more effective solution to reducing the criminals IELTS Writing P2

In most countries, prison is the most common solution for the problem of crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become criminals. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

At present, A host of criminal cases frequently happen in our surrounding, for example, the school shooting case and a wild range of terrorism cases, which harms the individuals' lives and properties, especially for the children. At the same time, some people believe the prison is the most common approach to the problem of crime but not the effective way, while, the more efficient way is to offer people with better education so they do not become criminals. In my opinion, I totally agree with this topic.

In term of the purpose which how to utilize the education to reduce the crime rate, it meant how to makes the criminals give up to crime efficiently and makes them adapt to the society safely. I suggest we should pay more attention to the mental education, especially for the young criminals since they are on the stage of mental development, which meant they are easy to be influenced by the mental education. In addition, actually, most of the criminals turn to violent and anti-social, which caused by they did not have the positive schooling and parenting before they into the society, such as bullying and mistreatment. Therefore, it is the essential approach to deal with the problem that instructing the criminals that how to distinguish the right from wrong and how to rebuild or repair the mental health, rather than put them into the cells.

On the other hand, traditional prison model cannot meet the demand of the public safety obviously since increasingly a number of criminals continue to crime after their sentences are over, the main reason is that the criminals do not realize the influence of crime, which includes that they bring plenty of harm to the innocents even killed someone' life. So, in essence, we are merely imprisoning their bodies and not help them to wash their sinful souls.

Totally, people could gain a lot from the education in crime issue. And many employees and researchers predict that education will become the main trend for reducing the crime rate and prevent the crime nationally and internationally.