Globalization IELTS Writing P2

Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to the international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present, globalization becomes a trend of development of the world. Increasingly a number of countries began to deal with problem together. Such as environmental protection and the international business. But some people deem globalization would be more helpful to international business, rather than the environmental protection. In my opinion, they do not have comparable at all.

As we know, the most countries began to make cooperation for the problem of global warming. It is well-known that at present every country needs to obey the emission rule that is called "Pairs treaty". So in my view, it is undeniable that the action is one of the best significant benefits for environmental protection. At the same time, more and more countries began to seek the cooperation with other countries to solve the pollution issues together.

Speaking of the globalization, one of the best important factors is international business since that is the start line of the globalization. If you analysis the data of the economic development of the world, you would find the sharp increase of economy appears in when we began the globalization. For example, America, since 19 century, America join the globalization, and now the USA becomes the biggest economy, which is the business-benefit of the globalization.

But some people would deem international cooperation just focus on the business benefit at present. I deem it is a joke. Because the business cooperation is more mature than the international cooperation environmental protection if you research the history of the globalization. you would find the massive globalization began in 19 century, while the awareness of protecting the environment began in 20 century. Therefore, this gap approximately one century. I could not deny that we need to improve the international cooperation of environmental protection, but the time lag between the developments is a problem we must be faced.

Totally, it is undeniable that we really need to protect our earth together, but please do not forget the importance of the economic development since that is the premiss condition for the development of advanced technologies to more efficient protecting our environment.