Leave school trip - IELTS Writing P2

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Today increasingly more young people like to have a travelling between finishing high school and starting the high-education course. In my opinion, that is not only a relaxable leisure tour but also is an efficient and effective method to expand your horizon. However, it has a bit of imperfect issue.

I believe the travelling have a host of advantages to the personal development of students. one of the most significant points that they could recognise the different culture and geography knowledge. Moreover, they could make a variety of friends from the different countries and regions, or find the goal of their university studies, which become a preparation of choosing the subjects before their high-education life starting. In addition, this travelling is a good chance to relax, and if you do not use this period of leisure time to take easy, there may not be enough time for travel in the future since you will busy when your advanced education starting.

Although the travelling is a good choice for 'opening your eyes'. Anyway, it still has some drawbacks. For example, the most of students want to take this trip, which needs financial help from their parents. But not all of the parents can shoulder this bill of the trip. And I believe the most of parents deem it is not a cheap travelling that to expand their children's horizon. In my view, they more willing to use this money as the education fund for their children.

In conclusion, it is an excellent choice and wonderful trip in your learning career. It could give you an experience never before you feeling. But it also is an expensive expense for your family.